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Adapting Your Novel Into A Screenplay by Krystol Diggs

KrystolYou have this great novel that has probably sold well and now you think it will be a good film. I know that writing a novel is no easy feat, but now it’s time to adapt your baby into a screenplay. It may be difficult to some, but here are some easy tips that will help you.

First things first: Even though you may have written the book or may be hired to adapt a book, read the book twice before you start your process. Read it the first time for leisure and to get a good grasp on the main characters. The second time, start to take notes on the characters, how they look, their personality, and things that they say. Once you have done these steps, make a detailed list of each character that’s most important to the story. If you have to, this is also the time to do some research about things you are unfamiliar with. Remember, although this is fiction, fiction has to be believable. If it’s a biopic film, then it is imperative that it is believable. With movies, it has to look real and be believable, or your audience will realize it is not. When it comes to screenplays, it is a different ball game. The audience wants to see if the screenwriter can put on a great movie.

Second: Now that you have your outline and a structure for your screenplay, it’s time to format it into your paradigm worksheet (See below about the paradigm sheet). When the worksheet is completed, it’s time to start writing your screenplay. Keep in mind, that everything WILL NOT be added into your screenplay from the book. Some parts should be omitted, but the basic storyline is there with the characters.

Examples of Film Terminology: INT (Inside), EXT (Outside), ACTION (Action Scene), FADE IN (The beginning of your screenplay), FADE OUT (The ending of your screenplay), CUT TO (Camera goes to next scene)

The Paradigm: The Paradigm is a blue print of what your screenplay will look like.
Act I- Beginning
Act II- Middle
Act III-End

Act I- Unit of dramatic or comedic action
Act II- Unit of action that begins at the end of Plot Point I and extends through the end of Plot point II. (This portion of the script is approx. 50-60 pages).
Act II is about conflict and obstacles overcame. It’s also a unit of dramatic action. Act II goes from the end of Plot point II. (Approx. Pg. 80-90 to the end of the screenplay.)
* Remember that resolution means solution.

Act I- Everything in Act I sets up your story.
A plot point is the story’s progressive point.
Plot point I is the true beginning of your story. A plot point can be anything you want it to be as long as it moves the action forward.

Act II is the most difficult to write because it’s the longest unit of action.
The function of Plot Point II is to serve the story progression.
For example, Plot point I, Plot point II can either be a decision, a line of dialogue, a scene or an action sequence-anything you want it to be.

Act III deals with the context of resolution other wise known as (the solution).

Remember that the average length of a film is 2 hours long, which makes the average screenplay between 90- 120 pages long.

I write my screenplays in Final Draft. I know some people who use Word, or a program called Celtx. . Final Draft is software that’s used to write your screenplay.

Questions: Here are some questions to think about when filling out your paradigm sheet:
1. What is the solution to your story?
2. Does your character live or die, sink or fail, go on a trip or not?
These are some of the questions to be answered during the writing process of your screenplay.

IF YOU ARE SERIOUSLY INTERESTED IN WRITING YOUR SCREENPLAY YOU SHOULD:
1. Read as many scripts as you can that are your genre.
2. Watch every movie that you can afford in your genre.
3. Download screenplays for free: Simply Scripts.com or Dailyscripts.com.

Try this exercise: Before you express your story, know these things:
1. The Ending
2. The Beginning
3. Plot Point I
4. Plot Point II
These elements are the structural foundation of your screenplay. Once you know these four elements draw the paradigm. The exercise is designed to prepare you to structure your own idea so you can move into the next stage of your screenwriting process.

Okay, now that you have learned about the beginning stages, how research is important and the paradigm let’s get busy!

AN EXAMPLE OF THE FIRST PAGE OF A SCREENPLAY

FADE IN:

SCENE HEADING: INT. HOUSE – DAY

ACTION: JORDAN, 18, brown eyes, wears a satin blue gown, sits at her vanity table putting on make-up for the prom. As she applies blush, she looks at the pictures of her and MIKE, blonde hair and blue eyes, as they kiss each other. CARLA, Jordan’s mother, brown skin with brown eyes knocks on the door.

CHARACTER: CARLA

DIALOGUE: Jordan, Mike’s here and he looks so cute in his tuxedo!

CHARACTER: JORDAN

DIALOGUE: Mom, I will be down in a few minutes, I have to finish my make-up.

Smiling from ear to ear, Carla has tears in her eyes.

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Bio: Krystol Diggs has been writing since the age of 15. Her debut novel Through Her Eyes was the jump-start of more to come from this author, and now screenwriter, and publisher. Krystol has received her Masters degree at Full Sail University with an MFA in Creative Writing. She has written four screenplays, two short films and a host of other books in the various genres of fiction, thrillers, erotica, young adult and drama which can be found on amazon.com. She has also written for magazines such as Raw Talent Magazine and Bougie Magazine, interned at IFashion Network as a writer and now is a reporter/journalist for CNN’s Ireport section. Krystol is currently attending Walden University where she is studying for her PhD in Human Services.


Don’t have a copy of Become A Successful Author? What are you waiting for?Become A Successful Author is used in the “How To Write That Novel” course at Chicago State because it covers everything from branding to writing to editing to formatting and uploading electronic and print books to marketing and so much more. Your time is money. Look at all the time, thus money, you’ll save by ending your search for answers: Purchase Become A Successful Author for only $4.99 (eBook) or $8.99 (print) from: Amazon (US), Amazon (UK), Barnes & Noble

 Krystol paradigm worksheet
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Why You Should Make Every Sale a Celebration by Bryan Cohen

Bryan150It’s easy to get disappointed as an author. We all want our books to be devoured by the population at large so we can sell thousands of copies a month and live completely off our writing. Most writers never reach those heights, and it’s understandable for the writers that fall short to get down in the dumps. But there is an alternative to beating yourself up whenever you don’t reach your lofty goals.

Instead, you can celebrate even the smallest of achievements.

1000 Creative Writing Prompts Volume 2 CoverWhen your book makes its first sale of the month on Amazon, there’s no reason why you can’t put your arms up in the air with a triumphant yell. When you get a 4-star or a 5-star review, why not read it out loud and make sure the praise fully washes over you? And if you get a fan letter, what’s stopping you from sharing it with a friend and doing a little jig of joy?

Maybe you think I’m being too silly or optimistic, but I’ve always gotten a lot more out of celebrating tiny scores than I have out of lamenting my shortcomings. This is a blog about becoming a successful author. For most, the concept of success lives at the top of a mountain that we’re continuously climbing toward. For a select few, success is broken down into thousands of little successes along the way. The latter aren’t necessarily more successful than the former, but they certainly enjoy the business of writing a lot more.

This holiday season, try to remember how amazing it is to be a writer. Love the work you do. Give yourself constant rewards: physically, emotionally and socially. Maybe you won’t sell more books, but you’ll get a lot more out of your writing journey.

About the Author

In honor of his new book, Cohen is hosting the “1,000 Prompts, 1,000 Dollars” Writing Contest on his website. Click the link to find out how to enter!

Bryan Cohen is an author, a creativity coach and an actor. His new book, 1,000 Creative Writing Prompts, Volume 2: More Ideas for Blogs, Scripts, Stories and More is now available on Amazon in digital and paperback format. His other books include 1,000 Creative Writing Prompts, The Post-College Guide to Happiness, and Ted Saves the World. He has published over 30 books, which have sold more than 20,000 copies in total. Connect with him on his website, Build Creative Writing Ideas, on Facebook or on Twitter.

The Twitterverse Made Easy by Chicki Brown

Chicki BrownDeatri asked me to share about maximizing Twitter. I’ve heard a lot of authors admit that they don’t use Twitter or, even if they have ventured into the Twitterverse, they don’t tweet on a regular basis. Big mistake, in my opinion.

I know. You’re already overwhelmed with social networking and you don’t even want to think about adding another chore to your to-do list. But if you need to eliminate or avoid something, it shouldn’t be Twitter. Why do I say this? Because the literary community on Twitter is different from every other social network. The authors and readers are supportive and committed. In the year or so that I’ve been active on Twitter, I’ve discovered several things that make the difference when marketing your books.

The secret of Twitter is reciprocation.  If you follow other authors, bloggers, reviewers and readers and RT (retweet) for them, they will do the same for you. This means that your tweets will go to all of their followers.

The next most important thing about Twitter is the use of hashtags, those words preceded by a # sign. When you send a tweet without hashtags, it only goes to your followers. When you add tags, they serve to attach your tweet to a specific following – people with an interest in a certain category like #romance, #mystery, #newrelease, etc., and these tags are followed by multiple thousands of people. Here’s my personal list of popular tags for authors and books. I’ve separated them by category. It’s best to mix and match the tags that apply to your book and not use more than three. Remember, the tags will take up some of your 140 characters unless you’re using a Twitter management tool like Tweetdeck or Hootsuite, which I’ll explain in a minute.

TWEETS OF INTEREST TO AUTHORS/WRITERS A Woman's Worth(interviews/craft/) –

#authorRT #Tweets4Authors @Writerlytweets @WritersRT @WritersRetweets

TO PROMOTE A BOOK –

#BYNR @promoteyourboo1 @free_book_promo @BookTweetTeam  @digitalbookend

TO PROMOTE AN INDIE BOOK –

@indtwt  @IHB6  @IndBk  @VoiceOfIndie @IndieBookTweet @IndieAuthorNews  @indiebookpromos  @IndieWriterSupp

FOR BOOK PROMOTION (GENERAL) –

@BooksandAuthor @A_Book_Shelf  @Writers_Cafe @Readers_Realm @AvidReadersCafe @GoodBooksBlog1 #lovetoread #bookworm #bookspotlight #WritersKaboodle

TO PROMOTE A ROMANCE –

@romanticpicks @ROMANCEONLY @ReadingRomance @RomanceinColor  @storiesoromance @allromance @JUSTConRom  @RmTwts

TO PROMOTE A NOOK BOOK –

@bnbuzz @nookbn @nookboards

TO PROMOTE A KINDLE BOOK –

@Kindle_India  @kindle_ch  @GoodKindles @kindle_promo @KindlePromotion @IndieKindle  @MadKindlePromos  @AmazonBookPromo

TO TWEET ABOUT SOMETHING OF INTEREST TO INDIE AUTHORS (not book promo) –

@IndieAuthorLand @IndAuthorSucess @IndieExchange @IndieAuthorAnon @IndieWriteNet @indiepubnews @IndiesUnite

TO PROMOTE A CHRISTIAN/INSPIRATIONAL BOOK –

@CEBTAuthors  @Christian_Reads

The other secrets of Twitter are the way you format your tweets and the frequency at which you post a tweet and the time of day. Formatting is simple. You want to get your point across using the least amount of characters possible. Always put your book title in all CAPS so it doesn’t get lost among the other characters. Abbreviate whenever possible, but never abbreviate words in the book’s title. You want people to be able to look up the book online without a problem. It’s not necessary to shorten the buy link to your book, because Tweetdeck or Hootsuite will automatically do it for you. Here’s an example of three tweets I might post in a day for my new release:

Love is the greatest healer. A WOMAN’S WORTH http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00EUH6M3S @JUSTConRom @RmTwts @digitalbookend #BYNR @indtwt @IHB6

Marc is helping Gianne to heal her body. Why won’t she let him heal her soul? A WOMAN’S WORTH http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00EUH6M3S @IndBk @MadKindlePromos

Why would Gianne Marvray move to Vegas 2 B with a man she barely knows? A WOMAN’S WORTH http://bit.ly/1dTlshd @bnbuzz @nookbn @nookboards

As far as frequency and time, it’s most effective to tweet three times a day. The optimum times are: mornings between 8 and 9 AM (after people get to work and get settled in front of their computers. LOL!) Midday between 12 Noon and 2 PM and evening between 5 and 8 PM).

That might sound like a lot, but there are ways you can type all of your tweets at once and schedule them to run hours, days, weeks or even months in advance. This is done by using one of the Twitter management tools like Tweetdeck or Hootsuite. They are both free to download, and they will make tweeting a whole lot easier. I never use Twitter.com anymore. It doesn’t do everything you need it to do.

My last suggestion to maximize your Twitter reach, if you have a blog, is to join Triberr.com and sign up to be part of one or more tribes. Triberr was created solely as a way to increase your reach on social networks. The main tribe I belong to has a reach of 151,000 (the combined Twitter following of all the tribemates.) Every time you post a new entry, the link goes directly to Triberr and all of your tribemates will retweet it for you. Retweeting on Triberr requires no typing. You merely click. It takes twenty minutes tops.

I hope this wasn’t too confusing. I encourage you to take use of Twitter to promote your books. It’s fantastic!

Chicki Brown

Dee here: I hope you SHARE THIS ARTICLE with all of your author friends. I know I’m not the only one with Twitter issues and Chicki has made it so easy for us. Don’t be stingy, SHARE SHARE SHARE.


Don’t have a copy of Become A Successful Author? What are you waiting for?Become A Successful Author is used in the “How To Write That Novel” course at Chicago State because it covers everything from branding to writing to editing to formatting and uploading electronic and print books to marketing and so much more. Your time is money. Look at all the time, thus money, you’ll save by ending your search for answers: Purchase Become A Successful Author for only $4.99 (eBook) or$9.99(print) from: Amazon (US), Amazon (UK), Barnes & Noble

Connect Your WordPress Blog To Your Facebook Fan Page by Stephanie Norris

EXIF_JPEG_T422Trying to figure out how to have your blog connected to your Facebook fan page can be frustrating and time consuming.  When I tried, it was almost an epic failure. I took to the Google search engine and typed; How to connect your wordpress blog to your Facebook Fan  page. Post after post after post told me how to connect my blog to my Facebook profile, but not the fan page. Other links I found gave me instructions but they were old, from 2010 to 2012. Now we all know Facebook does updates it seems like every month! So of course those instructions were not so helpful anymore. It took me a full day playing around with it to figure it out so I pass this knowledge on to you.

Dee here: The images that accompany this post did not show up well in blog format, so I created a PDF of the entire post: WordPress to Facebook.

Stephanie Nicole Norris is an author, website designer, and blogger of all things romance, drama, and suspense. She loves to support other authors and every week she highlights a different author on her WordPress blog. Stephanie currently has two books in print and ebook. For more information or to inquire about a spotlight feature on her blog email her at stephanie@stephanienorris.net.

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Don’t have a copy of Become A Successful Author? What are you waiting for?Become A Successful Author is used in the “How To Write That Novel” course at Chicago State because it covers everything from branding to writing to editing to formatting and uploading electronic and print books to marketing and so much more. Your time is money. Look at all the time, thus money, you’ll save by ending your search for answers: Purchase Become A Successful Author for only $4.99 (eBook) or$9.99(print) from: Amazon (US), Amazon (UK), Barnes & Noble

Let’s Talk Ganxy by Bettye Griffin

Something RealI first heard about Ganxy from a post on one of the blogs I read regularly, The Writer’s Guide to ePublishing. I found the idea of selling to readers from my website, blog, and/or Facebook page with 90% of the cover price going into my pocket intriguing, to say the least. (Note: Some refer to this as a “royalty,” a term I don’t really agree with in this context; the arrangement seems more like a commission to me since these are retailers, not actual publishers.) I decided to give it a try by setting up a test showcase (as they call product pages) at Ganxy.

It seemed daunting for someone like me, who knows squat about ePUB and MOBI files, both of which Ganxy recommends be uploaded. About all I could handle was a PDF, which is the third and last format Ganxy recommends. These three formats pretty much cover any eReader device. I read the instructions thoroughly, then did a search for a site that converts documents to ePUB and MOBI formats. I found Online Convert, which does it for free (they do accept donations). I followed Ganxy’s suggestion and named each new file with the book title, my name, and the format.

Once that was done, I was able to go back and finish my showcase. I decided to take advantage of the function that allows me to list other retailers, because some folks will always want to purchase from Amazon or BN, and there’s no denying that the reviews on those sites still stand for something (The folks at Ganxy are reportedly working on incorporating reviews into Showcases, but I haven’t heard from where). Since I am an Amazon Associate, I made sure to include my personal ID in my links so I get credit for any orders from those who prefer to buy from Amazon.

I then embed the code on the main page of my newly re-designed website for an easy purchase link. The showcase is pretty big, and since there’s no way to fit seven of them (and counting!) on one page, I also set up an eStore on a single page that lists my other titles by linking each cover to its corresponding showcase. I also set up showcases for my traditionally published titles that are still available, although with links only rather than files for direct sales, since I do not own the rights to sell these directly. Take a look and tell me what you think!

These are the pluses of hooking up with Ganxy that I’ve identified to date:

  • The purchaser’s choice of format, which between them cover all devices: MOBI, ePUB, or PDF. One disadvantage: Readers will have to load the book onto their eReader themselves, which might be a turnoff for Kindle owners; I believe their books are loaded automatically on their readers when purchased thru Amazon. I try to head this off by discounting the prices at my eStore for new releases…nothing like offering readers an incentive!
  • A 90% cut of the cover price of all eBooks sold, rather than the 65% and 70% offered by BN and Amazon for books priced at $2.99 and above).
  • The 10% cut Ganxy takes is effective even if your book or story costs less than $2.99. In that situation Amazon increases its take to 65%, with just 35% going to the author; BN increases theirs to 60% with the author getting just 40%. You can sell a 99-cent short story and pocket 90 cents, not 35 or 40 cents! (Note that authors, not the customers, pay the credit card processing costs, which are a few cents per transaction…just the way J.C. Penney or Red Lobster pays this fee when you use your credit card at their locations. It’s true that a law recently became effective that allow merchants to legally pass on processing fees to their customers, but generally the only type of merchant who charges service fees on top of the price of the product are those selling concert or event tickets.)
  • The ability to offer free eBooks to readers, choosing an end time by whichever is reached first: A maximum number of free downloads or an end date. Doing this on Amazon and BN is very difficult and involves lots of patient waiting, sometimes in vain. Note that Ganxy may be charging authors to offer free downloads in the future; I won’t know what the fee will be until they initiate it.
  • The ability to offer sale priced eBooks to readers, with automatic end dates/criteria set (i.e., “The first 150 people to download this eBook will get $1.50 off the cover price”). The possibilities for this are endless…introductory price sales…12-hour sales…5-hour sales…Valentine’s Day sales…Cyber Monday sales…Black Friday sales, to name a few. My current sales are listed at the top of my eStore page. I’ve already started the practice of offering introductory prices for new products to entice readers to buy from my eStore rather than Amazon or BN. Another plus is that price changes go into effect immediately, the second you hit the Enter key. There’s no waiting for the retailer to adjust the prices, the way the other guys make you do.
  • Smooth and prompt payment processing. If you’ve earned the minimum (I don’t remember what it is, but I’m thinking $10), you can request payment at any time. My funds were deposited in my Paypal account within two days of my request. You don’t even have to wait 60 days…you only have to wait until you make the minimum.
  • Gift options are available.
  • Offering bundles are super-simple…instead of having to assemble one file of two or three books into a single linked file, which can be unwieldy and be difficult for readers to download, authors can choose which of their books they want to include in the bundle and the reader will receive a separate file for each! So if you want to offer a bundle of a series (Ganxy recommends including two to six books in a single bundle), just set up a showcase, set a price, and choose which files you want to include. No special formatting to do.
  • Your customers have the option of signing up for email notifications from you about future releases or sales. I’m surprised at how many customers took advantage of this. Whenever I offer a sale, they’re the first ones to know about it.
  • Superb and prompt customer service. I had many questions along the way, and they got back to me very quickly…even on Sunday.

Another plus, albeit an indirect one: Since I’ve learned how to create MOBI and ePUB files, I can now offer free downloads of short stories direct from my website, bypassing retailers altogether, if I choose to take that route.

Another important factor is your own aspirations, since everyone’s are different. If Amazon rankings are important to you, you might want to skip Ganxy altogether and continue selling only through ranked channels. My own career has taken an unorthodox path in that I began by being traditionally published but am not pursuing that path now, so a higher earnings potential holds the most appeal for me. I must admit that I’m not comfortable with Amazon wielding so much power, and I like having an alternate option. But it’s understandable for those pursuing a traditional publishing contract and/or those who like to announce their book’s sales rankings or placement in the Top 100 Bestsellers of its genre may prefer to get as many sales as they can through Amazon…editors are certain to check your rankings, and while no one really knows if repeatedly declaring yourself to be a bestselling author translates into sales, it’s not going to hurt anything, either.

Finally, this is an overview of my experience, not an endorsement. The decision to Ganxy or not to Ganxy has to be made by each individual writer, just like everything else in the business. I strongly suggest reading their Terms of Service thoroughly. But if you do decide to set up one or more Author Showcases, it’s always nice for them to know the source of the new business. For that reason, if you do decide to set up one or more showcases, I’d appreciate it if you would drop an email to Lonnie Rosenbaum at Ganxy at lonnie @ ganxy.com (please remove the spaces) and let him know I referred you!

For more information about Ganxy, you might want to check out this recent article in Forbes magazine.

Bettye Griffin

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Don’t have a copy of Become A Successful Author? What are you waiting for?Become A Successful Author will be used in the “How To Write That Novel” course at Chicago State because it covers everything from branding to writing to editing to formatting and uploading electronic and print books to marketing and so much more. Your time is money. Look at all the time, thus money, you’ll save by ending your search for answers: Purchase Become A Successful Author for only $4.99 (eBook) or $9.99(print) from: Amazon (US), Amazon (UK), Barnes & Noble

Some Things that I learned at NY Comic-Con by Cerece Murphy

After taking a week to recover from the whirlwind which was this year’s NY Comic-Con, I wanted to share with other authors some of the things I learned.  I had a booth in the Small Press section of the event.  This was my first time exhibiting anywhere as an author, so if some of the lessons here seem obvious, forgive me, but I didn’t want to leave anything out.

1)      If you are a sci-fi/fantasy/paranormal/horror author, you should try it.  This year’s Comic-Con brought out over 115,000 sci-fi book/movie/comic lovers.  This is our target audience.  There were very few exhibitors of color, and even fewer female exhibitors.  I think I was the only one selling sci-fi novels in the ENTIRE small press section which included at least 90 exhibitors.  I say I think because I didn’t get to walk around much, but my friend did and said she didn’t see anyone else selling my genre.   If you present a visually interesting booth, you WILL get attention and an opportunity to pitch your book.  These are folks who are looking for something new.

2)      Prepare!  Exhibiting at NY Comic-Con is not cheap (the booth alone was $949). You want to make a visually stimulating impression.  You can get a high quality banner from VistaPrint for $50.  I did this and got a very large foam board poster of my book cover and it worked well.  I also had smaller posters of my book cover that lined the curtain of my booth (I got these for free) and a TV/DVD combo on my table that I used to play my book trailer on loop.  It got people’s attention.

3)      Your entire book pitch needs to be 15 seconds or less.  You probably already know this, but there is so much stimulation overload at the convention that people really can’t handle a lot of info.  It is very loud.  I tried to ask folks, if they were sci-fi novel fans.  This worked for me.  It allowed me to address passerbys personally and let them know what I was selling at the same time.   Here is my entire pitch:

Me: Are you a sci-fi reader?

Reader: Yeah, I am.  What’s Order of the Seers about?

Me:  Well, the story is about a group of people who can see the future and are enslaved for that ability and the book is all about how they escape the organization that is trying to exploit their gift, reclaim their power and ultimately fight back. (I usually pause here to see if they have any questions.  If they are staring at the cover and don’t ask any questions, I then add)

So there is lots of action, adventure and suspense with a little bit of romance too.  If they didn’t ask any questions, I would then go on to mention the sale price of the book and offer to sign it for them if they are interested.

That’s it.  I don’t like a “hard sell” approach, so I just tried to think of something I could say that I would be comfortable with.  If someone said they weren’t a sci-fi reader, I usually asked them what kind of books they liked to read.  Sometimes that discussion led to a sale. Other times, I recommended other authors that would suit them better.  Either way, my goal was to create a positive experience for everyone who came in contact with my booth.

4)      Free stuff.  I had candy at my table and postcards that had my book cover on the front and a very short description of my book on the back with a QR code that linked to a free download of my first chapter.  People seemed to like that.  I also had “Order of the Seers” gift bags that I ordered on line for about $.75 cents a bag.  I gave them out for free with a book purchase and sold them for $3 each alone.  I can give the link to the companies I used for the postcards and the bags if anyone is interested.

5)      The contacts that I made were very valuable.  I met librarians, bloggers, press and an agent who took my information.  I did 3 on the spot interviews and got a chance to submit my information for a free ad within a small NY based magazine.  These were all people I never would have met if I hadn’t gone.  We’ll see what this means in terms of actual exposure and book sales, but I also met some wonderful people in the industry that I look forward to working with on future projects

6)      Book sales.  In 4 days, I sold 5 ½ cases of books (32 books to a case). I am told this is good for a no-name author in the Small Press section with only 1 title (I’m not putting myself down.  It’s just true).  I think if you have more than one title, you could do even better.  I more than paid for the cost of my booth and rentals (something I was told would not happen).

7)      Cost controls.  A big part of why I was able to make a small profit was that I stayed with a friend while in NY.  I think this is essential.  A complete breakdown of all my costs is listed below.  If you are not local, you will probably have to rent a table.  My raggedy 6 ft table cost me $70 to rent!  Make that your one and only rental.  Buy folding chairs at WalMart or Target.  Get your own table skirt (They want $200 to rent a fully skirted table).

8)      You need help.  Get at least 3 people to rotate the days with you.  No less than 2 on any given day.  You are entitled to 5 exhibitor passes with your booth, so you can give them to your friends in exchange for help.  I had at least 1 people with  me every day and while it was enough, I still didn’t get much time to walk around and that makes a sci-fi chick a little sad….

9)      Bring at least 150 books.

10)   There was A LOT of diversity among the attendees.  They would have LOVED to see more books and content with diverse characters.  Although, I am sure that my bookcover, which has a white woman on it, shook up folks expectations of what I was selling, I think that a cool presentation of any race of characters could do well in this environment.  Visual presentation is key here.  If it looks good, you will have an opportunity to SELL.

11)   Get them on the mailing list. Marketing guru, Seth Godin, has talked often about the publishing industries failure to capture the contact information of the people who buy their books, so that each time a new release comes out, they have to find those folks all over again.  I offered a free exclusive preview of the Order of the Seers sequel as a way to entice people to sign-up for my mailing list.  With this event alone, my mailing list has gone from 17 people to almost 200 folks that I now have permission to market my books to.  The moral of the story is creating some incentive for having people sign-up for your mailing list can really help build your base.

12)    Take the time to get to know the folks around you.  You’re going to be with these folks for 4 days.  These are the people who will watch your booth while you go to the bathroom.  Be nice.  I had two fellow exhibitioners refer me to helpful contacts (when they barely talked to other exhibitors) because I took the time to be courteous and helpful.

13)   My budget – $1539

  1. Booth rental: $949
  2. TV rental: $150 (This was a mistake. I wish I had just bought one for around the same price.)
  3. Table rental: $70
  4. Banner: $50 (Vista Print has the cheapest price I found)
  5. Table Cloth: $90 (I bought mine because I plan to do a lot of conferences)
  6. Chairs: $30
  7. Supplies and Incidentals: $100
  8. Javits Wi-fi: $100 (you won’t be able to process a credit card sale w/o this.  But most people had cash, so you could skip this and lose out on a small portion of sales.  But I imagine this service would be critical for people with higher priced items. )

I have listed out all the items that I bought/rented here to give you the most honest snap shot of what it will cost you to go to NY Comic Con, but I do not consider some of these items (chairs, banner, tablecloth),  to be just NY Comic Con expenses.  I have and will use these items in other events that I plan to attend throughout the next 12 months and beyond.

I hope this is helpful to you.  Please feel free to email me at cerecemurphy@gmail.com if you have any questions that I haven’t answered.

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Mr. Me Too by Kisha Green

I have been spending the last few weeks just thinking and basically analyzing my literary life and my offline life in general.

Anyhow, I have felt mentally drained from all of the projects that are currently on my plate. I initially wanted to help people and thought that my projects would be a good thing as well as bring exposure for my publishing company and myself.

What I failed to realize is that not everyone shares my views.  That is not a bad thing, but let me clarify before someone misunderstands what it is that Kisha Green is trying to convey.

Well, in this literary world there are Writers and Authors. Wait; before you ask where I am going with this rant, there is another category called “aspiring.” These people will never publish a damn thing, but they are all in every literary mix.

They will post a million and one notes on Facebook and let you read snippets on their blog, but a published book will NEVER happen. They may even send you book cover samples, but they are not ever going to be anything but aspiring.

Writers are people who simply write as a hobby and are content just W-R-I-T-I-N-G—nothing more and nothing less. They don’t care if they are going to be published or possibly ever become a NY Bestselling author. They write because it is their passion; they do not want any monetary compensation or notoriety.

Authors are those who love to write any and every chance they get and live, eat, and sleep literary. They want to have their work published whether it is self-publishing or even getting a literary agent, and shopping his or her book around for a traditional publishing house book deal. They write books, articles, short stories, and whatever else they can get their hands on.

“OH…you wrote a book?”

“Oh ok—yeah me too!”

“You wanna self publish?”

“Yeah, me too!”

“You’re working on your next book?”

“Yeah, me too!”

When I initially decided to publish anthologies through my DivaBooksInc  publishing company, I thought that I would be meeting authors, but have come to the realization that all people aren’t ready to be authors and are rather happy just being writers. This was a hard pill to swallow since I know myself that I love the literary world.  I love, meeting and networking with newbie authors, like myself, as well as seasoned authors.

Anyone who has had the pleasure of talking to me on the phone knows that I can go on for hours about LITERARY HOLLYWOOD!!

I completed four anthologies and the screening process was…exhausting, LOL!

“OH,you wrote a book?”

“Oh ok.  Yeah, me too!”

“You wanna self publish?”

“Yeah, me too!”

“You’re working on your next book?”

“Yeah, me too!”

You can see where I am going with this—LOL—I am sure you have had this conversation with someone at some time or another.

“Oh, you wrote a book?

“Oh ok.  Yeah, me too!”

“You wanna self publish?”

“Yeah, me too!”

“You’re working on your next book?”

“Yeah, me too!”

Yeah, Mr. Me Too is too funny and the reasons for this rant today. Plus, I was listening to the Clipse song called “Mr. Me Too” and said to myself, I have to write about this because there are a lot of those people out there in literary. So, basically, what I am ultimately trying to say is, SOME PEOPLE FAKE MOVES…WHILE OTHERS MAKE MOVES!!

The few who do are the envy of the many who only watch. ~Jim Rohn

Never regret. If it’s good, it’s wonderful. If it’s bad, it’s experience- Victoria Holt

Kisha Green

www.Literary-Jewels.com
www.DivaBooksIncOnline.com

 

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Writing a Mystery? Don’t Forget to Give Your Reader Choices

First off, I want to thank Deatri for allowing me to stop by her site as a guest blogger. It’s indeed an honor.

I always rub my hands together when I’m given a wide berth on writing topic. Usually, the commentaries I write come from my recent activities as a writer and as an editor. This post is no different.

I am a huge mystery/thriller fan. Patterson, Grisham, Connelly, Cornwell, and Clark are just a few authors I read, and Mary Higgins Clark (and her book All around the Town) sparked me to write my first mystery, Death at the Double Inkwell. I talk about Clark and my move toward mystery writing on the blog, The Blood-Red Pencil (http://goo.gl/Oo0zN).

Writing a mystery is an intricate endeavor. Just like with any story, you have to deal with developing strong characters, well-paced plots with heightened tension, dialogue that reveals character, and the list goes on and on. However, when writing a mystery, there are a couple more things you need to include.

There are plenty of resources available that discuss the many facets of mystery writing (“How to Write a Great Mystery” on NPR http://goo.gl/xqCdB, “Writing Mysteries” by Sue Grafton http://goo.gl/sMg4q, “How to Write a Damn Good Mystery” by James N. Frey http://goo.gl/8rbS5, and “Writing and Selling Your Mystery Novel” by Hallie Ephron http://goo.gl/Knlhr). In this post, I want to talk about one important facet: giving your readers choices.

Choices of what?

Choices of suspects.

We all know that in any mystery a crime is committed…sometimes multiple crimes, and as readers, we dive into a mystery to figure out who did it. As writers, we have to be able to sustain the mystery in our story. Typically, we don’t want the reader to figure out too soon who the culprit is. We do this by offering choices, an array of characters that might have a motive for committing the crime.

My favorite television series of all time is Murder, She Wrote. I think things I’ve learned from watching this show can help to illustrate the importance of choices.

While watching Murder, She Wrote, I hardly ever figured out who the killer was before Jessica Fletcher did and often wondered, “How in the world did she do that?” But there were things that happened throughout the course of an episode that kept me from crying foul as a viewer. As Jessica illustrated how the killer committed the crime, tried to keep it under wraps, and ultimately failed to do so, I realized a few things:

1-      As the story progressed, I could have figured out the mystery, and if I didn’t, the clues were there for me to do so. This kept me from arguing that as a reader, I have no opportunity to interact, take part in figuring out the mystery. Choices play a role here. If we are limited by the number of possible suspects, we run the risk of allowing the reader to figure things out way before the story ends…and then they may leave the page and stop reading the story. Sometimes, we are so concerned with making sure we plotted the story well that we have narrowed down the suspect list to only one person—way before the story concludes.

2-      Not only was the story well-paced, but the pacing of new suspects and elimination of other suspects were well-plotted, too. This kept me always guessing. Readers of mysteries like to interact with the story. They like to learn about new characters, see their connection(s) to the main character(s), and try to see if there are motives for these characters to be suspects. Again, if we are limited by our choices, there is no guessing for the reader. There is no interaction.

3-      The killer was always present in the story. This is an important one. It seems like “Well, duh,” but the fact is a reader will cry foul if s/he can’t do #1: read the clues and connect them to the culprit (whether during the story or once the culprit has been revealed). If the killer is never fully breathing, walking, talking, interacting with main characters, having a life in the story, then the revelation of this person being the culprit rings false.

If you’re working on a mystery right now, in the revision/rewriting stage(s), think about your suspects. Is there enough to keep the readers on their toes? Are the suspects actual parts of the story that readers get to see in motion? The more you think about these things in the writing and revision stages, the happier your readers will be when they jump into your story.

Shonell Bacon

Dee here: I’d like to thank Shonell for making a guest appearance on Become A Successful Author. I truly appreciate it and her.


Shonell Bacon is an author, editor, and educator. She’ll be rereleasing her first mystery Death at the Double Inkwell in February 2012, a month before her new novel Into the Web is released under Eclectic Soul Publications’ mystery imprint, Crimson Whispers. She’s been an editor for over 11 years, helping writers to develop strong stories ready for publication. Shonell has also taught in the university since 2001, teaching composition, mass communication, and creative writing. Currently, she continues to write while pursuing her Ph.D. in Technical Communication and Rhetoric at Texas Tech University. You can learn more about Shonell at her website, http://shonellbacon.com.


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Evolution of eBooks

Unless you’ve been living under a rock lately, I’m sure you’ve heard about the dramatic changes happening in the publishing industry. Independent and chain bookstores are closing at an alarming rate. Borders, the second largest U.S. bookstore chain, recently filed for bankruptcy and went out of business. Sales of hardcover books are down 40%. Editors at the Big 6 houses are reserving contracts for their big moneymaking authors, as the mid-list shrinks. The current situation has become so dire that Huffington Post, the Internet newspaper, now includes “bookstore obituaries” as a regular feature.

At the same time, the sale of e-books is up 400%.

Nine years ago, when I started writing, my only goal was to get an agent and sign with a New York publisher. During the first few years of my writing career, I had conversations with writers that had or were considering self-publishing their books. The idea of handling the details of publishing my own book turned me off to say the least. I knew self-published books couldn’t get shelf space in the major book chains. Many reviewers wouldn’t review them, and I’d heard stories about authors ending up stuck with boxes of unsold books stacked in their garage. No way did I want any part of that.

Fast forward to 2007. The first rumblings had begun about Amazon.com’s newest electronic gadget – the Kindle e-reader. At that time no one, except perhaps for Jeff Bezos himself, imagined this little gadget would be the game changer in an industry already plagued by antiquated policies and procedures, ridiculously long wait times between contract and release, decreasing sales, and increasing competition from tablets, smartphones, video games, DVDs and all things electronic.

As an author trying to break into the business, I kept my ear to the ground, fascinated by what I was hearing about the possibility of getting my books directly into the hands of readers. I submitted to editors and agents for several years and even signed with two well-known agents but received no offers. The whole process had begun to wear me down.

By 2009, with Kindle dominating the e-book market, authors were beginning to take notice, and many had taken the plunge into the electronic world. The financial perks of direct e-pubbing were a definite lure, along with the fact that e-books are eternal. They have no limited on shelf life like paper books, which eventually go out of print.

Traditional publishers generally pay authors 6-17% of the cover price of their books. E-publishers like Kindle offered 35% at the outset and subsequently raised that royalty rate to 70% for all books selling for $2.99 or more. The increase in electronic books has sparked a very loud and fierce debate among readers, writers. Many in the publishing industry stand by the necessity for gatekeepers (editors and agents) to protect readers from an in influx of bad books. Those on the other side of the debate insist that gatekeepers aren’t necessary, because readers are smart enough to determine for themselves what is good and bad. They believe, as I do, that what’s good will sell and what’s bad won’t. Simple.

The other debate increasing in intensity is what I call “the cold, dead handers” versus the “e-people.” These are the folks who staunchly declare that their paper books will have to be pried from their cold, dead hands before they switch to electronic reading. They melodramatically pontificate about the feel and smell of paper books and fight anything hinting of electronic progress.

Personally, I don’t think books will disappear completely, but as I look back at my vinyl albums, 8-track tapes and cassettes packed away in the garage, I’m not so sure. What is important is the ability of authors to be able to sell their stories to readers. It’s the words that make the story, not the paper they’re printed on. All of the current flap about the smell and feel of books will eventually fizzle out. Honestly, when was the last time you saw anybody sniffing and hugging a vinyl LP with tears in their eyes?  Change is hard for some, but change will eventually come whether we like it or not. We might as well embrace it and enjoy it.

In July 2010, I took the plunge and joined the ranks of electronic authors and published my debut novel directly to Kindle and Nook. I have since released three of my previously written novels with another due out in late December.

This is an exciting time for authors, but e-pubbing isn’t for the faint of heart. This isn’t a deal where you simply take your Word manuscript from your hard drive and toss it into cyberspace. The preparation is very much the same as getting a paper book ready for release. Professional editing is a necessity. The quality of the cover is a determining factor in the success of the book. Formatting of the manuscript for each of the different e-book sites can test the patience of a saint. Promotion and marketing is a never-ending chore.

But for those writers with the fortitude to learn the language and requirements of this new market, the doors are wide open.

Guest Blogger: Chicki Brown
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and @Chicki 663 on Twitter

Dee here: I’d like to thank Chicki for being a guest blogger this month. She is a self-publishing queen and has always been very helpful to others. THANKS.


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Self-Publishing – Is it for you?

Shelia M. GossI’m an author who has experience being with a traditional publisher and as a self-published author. In fact, right now, I do both. For my full length novels, I continue to go the traditional route, but with my short stories or novellas, I self-publish those. As a writer, you may be asking yourself what route you should go. The beauty of being a writer right now is that you do have options.

I will be using HOW TO SELF-PUBLISH & MARKET YOUR OWN BOOKS by Mack E Smith and Sara Freeman Smith as a reference in today’s post. If you don’t have the book now, this is one book to add to your MUST BUY list. It has been helpful in more ways than one.

Writing to most of us is fun.  Somewhere along the way, we decided we wanted to share our thoughts with the public. Where do we begin? Some of us pursue the traditional publishing route of trying to find an agent and/or publisher. Others may decide to self publish outright. Either way, we all have one common goal: To see our book IN PRINT.

Before we go any further, realize SELF PUBLISHING IS A BUSINESS.  Besides writing the manuscript, you will need stamina to handle the “business side” as well.

Here are a few questions to ask yourself:

  • Am I ready to be a sales rep, an accountant, a publicist, an inventory analyst…etc?
  • Am I prepared to do research and determine who’s the best editor, graphic designer, printer, distributor, etc for me?
  • Am I prepared to promote, promote and PROMOTE my book (s)?
  • And last but not least, am I willing to learn as much as possible about the publishing industry?

Keep in mind a lot of today’s best selling authors may have started off self-published. Self-publishing is another way to get agents and major publishers to notice you. I don’t know if you’ve read the books,  MY BROTHER’S KEEPER by Reshonda Tate Billingsly or Momma’s Baby Daddy’s Maybe by Jamise Dames. Well, they both started off self-published and are now with major publishers. I remember seeing MOMMA’S BABY, DADDY’S MAYBE as an Essence Bestseller for several months prior to it being picked up by a major publisher.

I mention those two books to show you that although you may self-publish, you don’t have to give up hopes of being with a major publisher. There’s a popular author who has several books out with a major publisher, but they also self publish other titles. So in actuality you can do both.

WHAT IS SELF-PUBLISHING AGAIN?

To self-publish means that you deal directly with editors, graphic designers, printers, and handle the marketing and distribution of your book.

Here are a few advantages of self-publishing:

  • You are in total control of the input (your manuscript) and the output (the finished product–YOUR BOOK).
  •  After expenses and distributor and book store discounts, you get to keep the profits. You don’t have to give the publisher and agent anything, because YOU’RE THE PUBLISHER.
  • You determine when you want your book released. If you want the date of your release to be your birthday, then that’s the date you can release your book. With a traditional publisher, they TELL YOU when it’ll be released.

There can be other advantages, but those are the main ones.

Now to some of the disadvantages:

  • Limited resources can be a hindrance. However, don’t fret, because if you don’t have the finances to outright self-publish, you do have options – Print on Demand (POD).
  • A limited distribution channel is another challenge self-publishers face. Thanks to the Internet and the success of those who came before us, you now have more options.

What is Print on Demand (POD)?

This is printing small quantities of books upon request within a short period of time using digital technology and minimum upfront costs.

If you choose the POD route, I advise you to read the fine print and use the one that best fits your needs. I also caution when using some of their services. The link I’m about to provide is the best resource I’ve seen on the subject.  http://www.sfwa.org/beware/printondemand.html.

Hopefully, this post gives you a better view on the pros and cons of self publishing or at least sparks your interest to find out more about it.

Is your head spinning yet? Smile. Feel free to jump right on in and start asking questions, if you haven’t already.

Shelia M Goss
http://www.sheliagoss.com/

Shelia is giving away a copy of her “Query EBook Workshop.” For your chance at this excellent workshop, you have to leave a comment here or on her What’s In A Synopsis post between now and Sunday Oct. 9, 2011. I’m (Deatri) also giving away a copy of Become A Successful Author to someone who comments on any of the site’s posts between now and Sunday Oct. 9. 2011. Winners are announced on the Winners page of this website.


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What’s in a Synopsis?

Shelia M. GossA synopsis is a condensed version of your full length novel. A synopsis is normally anywhere from two to five pages long. Although books and articles give different lengths, I’ve been told by industry professionals that a two page synopsis is sufficient so for the sake of this blog post this will be my focus.

A lot of agents and publishers request not only a query letter, but a synopsis during your first initial contact. The synopsis tells the reader exactly what your book is about. It should capture the essence of your novel from chapter one to the end. Keep in mind that you should not leave questions unanswered in your synopsis. I know when writing book reviews, you don’t tell the whole story out of fear of spoiling the story for the reader. But for the synopsis, please tell the reader what happened. Don’t leave the reader guessing. Stick to key points that will entice the reader to keep reading the synopsis until the only option they feel like they have is to read your manuscript.

Key things to remember when writing your synopsis:

  • Your synopsis should mirror your novel. The person reading should be able to tell your writing style by reading your synopsis.
  • Write in present tense.
  • Write in third person.
  • Your opening paragraph or the last sentence of the opening paragraph should have a hook.
  • Introduce your main characters. Show the internal and external conflicts they face in your story. Your synopsis is not the place to mention all of your minor characters unless the minor character causes a major conflict with your main character and is an integral part of your story.
  • Make sure you add transitional sentences so that the synopsis flows from paragraph to paragraph
  • Only include the major scenes or high points of your novel in your synopsis.
  • Edit your synopsis before submitting it.

Shelia M Goss
http://www.sheliagoss.com

Shelia is giving away a copy of her “Query EBook Workshop.” For your chance at this excellent workshop, you have to leave a comment here or on her Self-Publishing-Is It For You? post between now and Sunday Oct. 9, 2011. I’m (Deatri) also giving away a copy of Become A Successful Author to someone who comments on any of the site’s posts between now and Sunday Oct. 9. 2011. Winners are announced on the Winners page of this website.


Don’t have a copy of Become A Successful Author? What are you waiting for? Become A Successful Author covers everything from branding to writing to editing to formatting and uploading electronic and print books to marketing and so much more. Your time is money. Look at all the time, thus money, you’ll save by ending your search for answers: Purchase Become A Successful Author (eBook) from: Amazon (US), Amazon (UK), Barnes & Noble

Editing—Why Bother?

Lynel WashingtonLet’s be real! No one wants to hear that his or her self-determined work of art is subpar. That is understandable, but tough skin is essential if you are serious about producing an above-average product. Many authors are hesitant to invest in all three stages of editing. However, it’s vital that authors recognize the importance of each step in the process. The road to becoming a successful author is dependent upon one’s adherence to this mandate. Be sure to seek professional editing services, not close friends or family members who love to read your projects. Your “baby” deserves to be cared for by an objective experienced eye. The purpose of professional editing is to strengthen the content and minimize the flaws that exist within your manuscript after the cycle of self-editing, rewriting, receiving feedback from a critique group and more rewriting has been completed.

The following brief summary illustrates a few main purposes of each editing method.

The first priority is to acquire a developmental editor who will work side-by-side with you to:

  • Explain what works in the manuscript and what doesn’t
  • Point out areas in which the story does not make sense and inconsistency issues
  • Ensure that the plot is well-defined
  • Determine if the characters’ motivations line up with the characters’ personalities, feelings, thoughts and actions
  • Evaluate the Point of View’s validity throughout the document
  • Check that the showing of the characters’ actions is not overshadowed by an exhausting amount of telling
  • Assist in the proper set-up of dialogue and paragraph formation
  • Flag inconsistencies in setting and descriptions
  • Establish proper pacing and conflict resolution
  • Eliminate aspects of the manuscript that are not true to its established genre
  • Reorganize, add or remove scenes as needed
  • Provide guidance on all trouble areas

Once that detailed assessment has been completed and all of the necessary changes have been entered, seek out a copy editor skilled in the fine art of:

  • Sentence structure
  • Word reduction
  • Spelling
  • Grammar
  • Punctuation
  • Reducing redundancy
  • Improving the flow of the text

Naturally, one would assume that the aforementioned steps are enough to guarantee a fine-tuned manuscript, but that is not the case. The editing process does not stop there. A proofreader is the essential missing link in this equation. What can a proofreader offer that the developmental editor and copy editor cannot? The proofreader serves as the final official set of eyes on your manuscript. He/she is the polisher, so to speak. The one who is there to add in that missing punctuation, forgotten word or two or three. And seal any loose ends—misspellings, misconstrued character names or minor formatting issues.

In essence, no stage should be skipped. The developmental editor, copy editor and proofreader are key participants in the transition from a mediocre effort to a job well-done.

Lynel Washington
www.lyneljohnsonwashington.com


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Shocking News To Authors: The Book Business Is A Business First

W. Terry WhalinBefore I began working inside a book publishing house, I had written more than 50 nonfiction books, ranging from children’s to adult books. I have never self-published a book and always worked through traditional publishers. However, I was unaware of the financial production numbers for nonfiction books and I found it shocking—and something critical for potential authors to understand. The author never sees these figures for their books as the publisher doesn’t reveal them throughout the contract negotiation process. A publisher will produce these financial calculations as simply a part of good business practices.  As an author, understanding this helped me see publishing as a business. Authors have huge amounts of time and emotional investment in their words. When I saw these production numbers, I understood that the publisher, not the author, has the largest out-of-pocket cash investment in a book.

Inside the publisher, the editor will gather a sales projection about how many copies the sales department believes they can sell of your title the first year. That sales figure will be used to calculate the production costs of ink, paper and binding for various amounts of printing (5,000, 10,000 or 15,000 copies). As the initial print number is raised, the cost per book decreases. You may ask, So why not print a large volume each time? The answer is, if the publisher prints a large number of copies, then he has to store those copies in their warehouse (read cost and expense), plus make sure they actually sell those copies within a year’s timeframe. The cost of tying up financial resources in storing and warehousing books that aren’t selling is large. Also the federal government taxes publishers on each copy in storage. These tax rules have forced publishers to think long and hard about how many copies of each book to print.

Inside my former publisher, we calculated the overall printing details of the book (paperback with general publishing look or hardcover with jacket) and the number of books to print before offering a book contract. In short, publishers pour a great deal of work into their books and financial projections before they call you and offer a nonfiction book contract. Understanding this process helps you see some of the reasons it takes such a long time for an author to receive a publishing contract…

Often the publisher returns to an author with whom they have already published a book. If the publisher takes a second or third book from the same author, they are investing in that author’s career and trying to build that author’s audience and market. If the author’s books are selling well, then the publisher will be eager for another project. Each week, publishers monitor sales numbers on their books to see if particular authors merit another book contract.

Many writers focus only on the creative aspects of writing a book and getting it published, but the executives inside a publishing house are business people who want to sell books and turn a profit at the end of the day. It’s a delicate balance between creating the best possible product and assuring that each product has the best opportunity to sell into the market and reach the target audience.

W. Terry Whalin

W. Terry Whalin, a writer and publisher lives in Scottsdale, Arizona. A former acquisitions editor, former magazine editor and former literary agent, Terry has written more than 60 nonfiction books including Jumpstart Your Publishing Dreams. To help writers, he has created 12-lesson online course called Write A Book Proposal. His website is located at: http://www.terrywhalin.com/

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Patience, Please

Lynel Washington
Lynel Washington

The most challenging task of being a copy editor is delivering what I’ve termed, “The Patience Speech.” Oftentimes, I receive manuscripts which I deem as incomplete from anxious first-time writers who are convinced their project is beyond ready for self-publication. My sense of professionalism is often tested by potential clients who haven’t researched the inner workings of the book industry and the intricate process of editing.

“What do you mean there are stages of editing?”

“Can’t you just do what you do and not focus on the missing parts?”

Well, to the novice writer asking me to perform copy editing services while closing my eyes to the developmental issues that may be present in his/her manuscript may be simple. Not! Don’t rush the process. Patience is a necessity. The journey toward becoming a published author is filled with speed bumps and pit stops. This is your first endeavor into the writing world. Trust those who’ve paved the way, learned the valuable lessons before you—your ancestors of writing, so to speak. Don’t judge these obstacles as painful; they are a catalyst for growth. What you may think is a finished product may be a rough draft in a professional editor’s eye. The work presented to your editor may include a great concept that may require further tweaking. On another note, until you have been through the process of developmental editing setting a release date is a no-no. It takes time to write, rewrite and write again.

Though you’re feeling excited about seeing your name on the cover of your first work of art, believe that an award-worthy finished product is more fulfilling than a less-than-stellar effort.

Lynel Washington

www.lyneljohnsonwashington.com

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Joining Writing Associations—A Good Idea for Authors?

Rob Shelsky
Rob Shelsky

Okay, I’m going out on a bit of a limb here. I want to discuss something that seems to get controversial at times, because writers seem to have a love-hate relationship with writing associations. Those that love them will defend them to their, figuratively speaking, dying breath. Those that hate them will often vituperatively try to drive their point home in a no-holds-barred diatribe. As for the neutral folk on this subject, few though there still may be, it’s a darn hard position to sit on that proverbial fence—very uncomfortable, to say the least, because the vast majority don’t want anyone sitting there. They want everyone to take sides on the subject of writing associations, it seems.

Yet, despite the philosophically inflammable nature of whether to join writing associations or not, I think it is a topic that needs discussion. Why now? Well, I just decided to join the SFWA (Science Fiction Writers of America), after having equivocated for some long time about doing so. It’s been so long, in fact, that my qualifying sale was almost obsolete! Of course, part of my delay was simply that I didn’t qualify—I hadn’t sold any stories “professionally” (as defined by the SFWA).

Anyway, let me back up and start at the beginning. When I first began to write, I became a columnist for AlienSkin Magazine. Now, sadly, that magazine has finally closed its doors this year, but only after almost a decade of having published online as a paying magazine, although, not at “pro rates,” again, as defined by the SFWA. And this sort of thing has been a problem for many writers. We are published, and some of us, as with me, are published very often, but it isn’t at the “defined” rates that are considered those of professional writers for various writing associations’ purposes, or through the types of publishers, they demand. For instance, some organizations do not recognize “eBook” publishers” as fitting their requirements for authors being “published.”

So one reason for my delay in joining SFWA was simply many magazines weren’t on their list, or didn’t pay the necessary minimum rates to authors. Besides this, I had asked an editor what she thought of joining SFWA, and her answer was rather equivocating, feeling it was very much up to the individual as to whether it was at all worthwhile or not. After all, it costs money—every year! So a writer has to ask him or herself always if something is worth the expense, if the “payback” is good enough to justify the costs.

I don’t know about you, but it seems everyone nowadays wants to “help” authors in some way (advertising, publishing, printing, PR exposure, workshops, promotions, etc.), and it always costs! But as a writer, I want to make money, not constantly spend it. So, I didn’t actively pursue joining a group that would cost me a significant amount of money on an annual basis. What’s more, I didn’t want to be bound to having to adhere to the list of publishers they allowed.

So why did I finally join the SFWA? Well, for one thing, it is a very old and prestigious organization. For another, there are definite benefits to an SF author there that can’t be found elsewhere, such as contacts, awards, etc., that if you are not a member, you simply don’t have much access to. So for me, joining SFWA, I think, was finally the right decision. And I have to admit, I feel a certain small sense of superiority at having been accepted by them, so there is that touch of snob appeal, as well. Yes, I’m shallow…but also, there can be no doubt they are an excellent organization for Science Fiction authors.

Moreover, most writers think this when it comes to whatever organization they join that represents their genres best, as with Romance Writers of America. And there are similar such organizations for mystery, horror, fantasy writers, and many others. But the point here is that we writers must think the benefits are worth the costs. With SFWA, I believe this to be so for me, at least. And many feel the same way about RWA and all those others.

But do these organizations always benefit authors? Well, that depends on the writer’s principle reason(s) for joining, I suppose. For example, I joined EPICTM, a few years back, because some fellow authors told me it was “created by authors for authors,” as they put it. Apparently, this was indeed so at one time, and by that organization’s own statement. However, I didn’t realize that this notion had changed considerably since the original founding of the group. As their own site, under “About Us,” now says:

Once an authors’ organization, EPICTM has expanded to include hundreds of professionals from all facets of the electronic publishing industry…members work together in a unique collaboration to further the industry…” [Emphasis and Underscoring Added.] (Source: http://www.epicorg.com/about.html)

Now this may be fine for those who are now members, but it wasn’t at all why I had joined, paid my money, if you know what I mean. You see, I recently had been burned at several eBook publishers, as an author, just about that time. I wanted more protections for authors in the exploding eBook market, and as a direct result of those experiences. That’s why I joined what I thought was an organization founded by and for authors.

Well, I quickly found out this idea put me at direct loggerheads with many in EPICTM. This was especially true, since the president and board were made up mostly of eBook publishers and editors (or former editors) of such companies at the time, and because, as you can see by their statement above, many of the actual members were eBook publishers and editors, as well. They all viewed the situation very differently from me. My viewpoints, sadly, were seen as a direct threat, or at least a challenge to their goals, although in all honesty, this had not been my intention. But even so…

So I withdrew from EPICTM before my first year was even up with the group. It was better than putting up with a long list of horrible emails sent to me, or posted in the public forum there, because of my pushing for authors’ rights. (Apparently, many saw this as some sort of attack on eBook publishers, which again, hadn’t been my intent at all.) In fact, I was taken off guard by the sheer vehemence of some of those who opposed my ideas, because to me, they had seemed innocent enough—just some simple protections for authors to aid them in choosing a “safe” and “reputable” eBook publisher.

So for me, personally, EPICTM wasn’t at all about authors’ protections anymore, so much as it was about publishers, editors, and many authors promoting eBook publishing itself. And that’s fine for them, but it certainly wasn’t for me. The aim of the group no longer coincided with what I wanted—protection for authors against predatory practices by some new, and definitely “fly-by-night” eBook publishers, of which I’d already been a victim.

So that’s an example of having to decide if a group is right for you. EPICTM just wasn’t for me. However, for others, who do have an active interest in promoting epublishing, the organization probably has many benefits. But as an author, I’m not so concerned personally with what type of publisher I publish with, so much as I’m concerned about just getting published with a reputable publisher, for good money, and with one who will help promote my career. This can be either actual print or eBook. I don’t care which it is, personally. I just like being published.

Now, how about other organizations, such as Romance Writers of America? Well, those who love it really do love it. And those who don’t, well, they don’t at all. Does Romance Writers of America (RWA) have many benefits for its members? According to many, it does. But it’s not cheap to be a member, and membership is limited in many ways. As a General Member, for instance, you must be “seriously” pursuing a career in romance writing, as their website says.

However, besides this, from what I’ve read on their site, you cannot be involved as a General Member if you are also an editor, agent, publisher, columnist, etc. I understand the reason for this restriction, but it is still a rather daunting one for many of us. Because if you are such (editor, publisher, agent, etc.), you have to go in as an “Associate” member, apparently, which is a much more restricted membership. For instance, they do not have voting rights.

Well, although I do write romances, have had several books published which are selling well right now in that genre, these provisions preclude me from being a General Member, since I also “seriously” am writing in the Science Fiction, Fantasy, and Horror genres, as well, and even more so than in romance. This doesn’t mean that I don’t want to be a good romance writer, too, but it isn’t my sole goal or aim. Also, since I do edit and am an editor for Wonderlust Magazine, I also cannot hold General Membership for those reasons. And my attitude is if I can’t vote, than why bother paying those annual fees?

Of course, I’m not saying there are not benefits to joining RWA. Of course, there are! But again, it’s just not for me. I had to make the decision, go by their own guidelines for General Membership, and so simply cannot become such a member. Nor, under such circumstances, do I want to be in the organization, restricted as I would be, and not allowed to vote. But for the author who wishes to pursue “seriously” a romance fiction career, and is not an editor, agent, etc., than perhaps RWA is the way to go. You must decide this for yourself.

So do you see what I mean, what I’m driving at here? Membership in each of these and other organizations is contingent on many variables. These can be number of books/stories sold, who you sold them to, what payment you received, and/or other things such as what career you wish to “seriously” pursue, whether or not you are also writing “seriously” in other genres, whether or not you are a publisher, editor, agent, as well, etc. These last are difficult, because many of us writers resort to these sorts of jobs to help us make enough money to continue writing. We often wear many different working caps. Plus, for me personally, being an editor seems to improve my own writing skills, since the job trains me to look for things editors don’t want in submissions (and for what they do want). So I like being an editor, as well as being a writer.

So should you join a writing association of some sort? Perhaps, but the choice must be strictly yours. You should research them carefully, weigh the positives against the negatives, and only then put down your money for membership. And always remember; you chose to be a member, and you can “unchoose” that decision at any time. And yes, I know “unchoose” isn’t really a word.

In any case, my point is you are not bound forever once you have made such a choice. And do remember, as with any organization involving humans, there will be those inevitable cliques there, those who play power games, and/or have their own particular axes to grind. That’s just life. So you have to either be able to deal with these aspects, or avoid joining such organizations. I will say this; things became so heated when I was in EPICTM and so time consuming and disturbing, that it was a relief for me to leave the group. I’m sure some of those in the group also felt the same way about me leaving there! Again, that’s just life. EPICTM wasn’t right for me, but who knows; it may be right for you.

As for me, I’m now delighted to be a member of SFWA, feel happy to be there, look forward to the benefits, want to contribute, and yes, I feel just a little smug about being a member. What can I say? Again, I’m just shallow!

Rob Shelsky

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